Independant Study by Joelle Charbonneau

Independent Study is not a bad book per se; however, quirks that didn’t bother me as much with the first book became problematic by the second. Yes, Cia is a bit too smart and figures everything out. But ultimately, that the characters talk like textbooks with very few colloquialisms made the story and characters feel very artificial to me. This was exacerbated by a narrator on Audible who also couldn’t make the words sound natural and instead felt like she was reading off a card, with odd breaks in the overly wordy dialogue.

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Story: Cia has passed the testing but now faces the challenges of induction. She’s been chosen as a leader for government and her life is just as perilous and decisions just as critical as during the Testing. Lives will be lost, she will face betrayal, but she will also be given hope for the first time. Cia will have to learn quickly: for every mistake she makes, someone will die.

Unlike most dystopian books, the government isn’t all evil nor populated with moustache twirling bad guys. Characters are good and bad and each have their own motivations for what they do. While this book did not peg my implausibility meter quite as frequently as other dystopians, there were still some questions about why the government is so stupid/allows Cia the chances she gets to learn more about them. The old “hiding behind an object just in time to overhear incriminating words from the bad guys’ was more than a bit too much.

As noted before, the dialogue here became very stilted by book two.  I didn’t mind it as much in book one – I greatly appreciate a character who acts with maturity and thoughtfulness. But when every character seems to be the same way, it does lead to monotony.  I began to wish for a character who would actually speak in sentences less long than an entire paragraph. It’s the type of writing that sounds good in your head but when said outloud, you soon realize how stilted and unnatural it sounds.  On the audible version, it really became problematic.

I will continue to read the series through to the last book. I’ve read some really poor YA dystopians lately and this is definitely not among them. But at the same time, I would have liked this better without the endless textbook dialogue or supernaturally gifted main character.

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